/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6665250
alright i had my fill of making terrible jokes to troll no-fun-allowed anons with, gonna give an actual critiques

pacing is alright, at least personally speaking. what was lacking from last round (from your entry at least) was more character interaction. dex at least had more character interaction, even if their entry was rushed and incomplete. i personally attribute complaints to it on subjective opinions, which is completely fair. not everyone has the time nor the attention span to watch the entire thing, even if it's only a couple minutes long.

i'd make a suggestion that you could make a companion comic, even if its just screenshots from the animatic itself, so people can get the gist of the story without watching the entire animatic. it doesn't need to be animated, just photos of every scene with accompanying subtitles would be nice. it might not fully capture the entire experience, but it'd be a good alternative to those who are too impatient to watch the whole thing.