/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3823700
>>3822652
>Light source
Second array of lights from behind.

>hard shadow cast from her ass to her hips

Explained above.

>Hands
They need tweaks; honestly, I'm surprised since I dislike the right even more.

>dog tags

Chain rolls up the neck. Feel the back of your neck, where the bumps of the spine are.

>halogen glow on the support beams
Fixed.

>>3819712
Your construction is off. The ribcage doe snot end at the breasts. Think of it as an egg that tapers at the top, with the top and aout one fifth of the bottom cut out. Then, mold it accordingly.