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>>2497128
I don't really think you should be tackling the Riley method just yet, your understanding of the rhythms that the Riley method shows is super all over the place.

If you are going to draw the Riley abstraction, make sure you study a Riley model for a while before trying to apply it.

But at the moment, you can't seem to utilise the method properly, so I suggest studying:

- Further study of fundamental forms of the head (basic construction - focus on studying eyes, and lips, those are your weakest points)
- Perspective studies (Norling's - Perspective made Easy / Scott Robertson's - How to draw / Still Life studies)
- The planes of the head
- Anatomy of the head (lower priority, just to help supplement your understanding of the planes and the Riley rhythms as the anatomy of the head tends to reflect the rhythms fairly well)

Keep on drawing anon - and stop symbol drawing those eyes!