/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3609564
I still have the image in recycle bin from last time asked. yes it should curve through the center of the object.
a straight line is simply a direction line in which its facing

observe 3 modified ones

>>3562719
youre visually copying, not drawing by understanding form.

>>3563184
child falling, priest going "you forgot your board"

>>3564303
your straight lines are fucking shit up.
forms are like a collection of shapes with a cloth draped over them. atleast the complicated thing youre trying to do are.
draw more sausages mate.
but take my advice with a pinch of salt im just a beginner. and too many peoples opinions may confuse shit.