/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4293311
Study the pubic arch of the pelvis, consider its plane and how the abductor muscles attach to it conforming to the same plane as the pelvis in perspective, this will allow you to understand where the pubic mound and Bagina originates. Find a reference with someone raising their arms and notice how the clavicle behaves along with the pecs and breasts that are pulled by the humerus. Stop trying to conveniently obstruct forms you do not understand behind hair it is lazy and it will show when you do it; head is slightly disproportionate to the torso and her left arm is not convincing enough to show that it is being bent it is too flat especially with the way you drew the deltoid there's no overlap in forms indicating space. The Deltoid would be moved behind with the dominant form being the chest muscle that attaches to the humerus.

It seems as if her right arm is broken into two, this is because again you are conveniently hiding forms such as the joints to avoid working with them and her right forearm seems to be reversed with the ulna facing us instead of the radius with her thumb originating form it.

>>3160642
>>3160627
>fighting over avatar fagging rights and namefagging

and nothing of value was lost.

/ic/ just stop posting it's embarrassing.