/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3773360
Dude, if you are going to do the 2 point lighting with a rim light from behind then do it shinier and put it on everywhere on the body, its point is to highlight the form in contrast against the darker background so might as well commit to it.

You shadows are only saturated but not darker, if you add more darker colors to it it will look better. I know the first time you add dark color to it it feels like you are ruining it but keep your optimism up it will look better.

Pick the direction of the main light and adjust your highlights spots to align to it, tits, nose shoulders biceps, eyeballs, highlight hair etc should roughly align towards it,it gives the picture a uniform feel.

Here is how I would change, I will post a second one to show it with arrows.