/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4110399

A bucnh of little things are off here and unfortunately they add up to a jerky animation:

1. Problems with one of the ears - see pic related. In one of the frames it completely changes angle and we don't see the inner ear for a single frame, which looks very jarring in motion. Later on in the animation, the same ear seems to jump from the back of the head to just behind the fringe (and the tuft of fur appears at the base of the ear). The ear also changes position vertically a lot, seeming to dip downards in the middle of the animation.

2. The eyebrow position is inconsistent, especially towards the end of the animation, where they start to climb into the hairline.

3. I don't quite get what's happening with the tongue. Is she in the middle of licking her lips (tongue moving to our right) as the animation starts? As she jerks to the right, I'd expect the tongue to drag, but instead the tongue keeps moving right as well.

4. Her locks of hair, especially on the fringe, are changing a lot each frame.

>>4110442
This. And the rotation of the little ring holding the bell is off as well. I'd simplify that whole thing, wouldn't redraw if frame by frame since.

All of this stuff makes the animation busy and inconsistent. You're almost there, though.