/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Is this what making it feels like?

I know it's not very good (anatomy is somewhat off, proportions are quite off even considering that I like a big upper body - guess my fetishes) but this is such a massive fucking improvement from everything I've drawn before in the sense of "getting closer to right" that I can't help but be excited.

Just wanted to share with you.

If any kind anons want to tear this apart, please do. One good critique saves me like 4 weeks of trial and error.