/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6161327
add some contraposto to the pose so his walk doesnt look so stiff, picrel, thats how you can make even simple and boring standing poses just a little bit more interesting and natural

linneweight seems a bit all over the place ad still too unfinished even if youre going for a more loose look instead of the boring vector looking lineart
but i cant really comment much cuz i dont do any finished linework style art, but i would look at artists with loose style of lines and see how even though it looks loose it isnt random if thats what you are going for

otherwise if youre going for the clean lines then again, tidy it up and use lineweight to show both shadow vs light ( thick vs thin)

>>4585251
That was from my imagination. I was trying to do a contrapposto pose. I feel like just copying is too much in my comfort zone but obviously I still need to do it more.

>>4320103
I read loomis and it's SHIT.
See your picture? IT"S SHIT, every character on that picture is in an unrealistic pose you'd never find a human being in.
People don't ever stand vertically, they always lean on one leg, and there go your retarded boxes.

Why is it shit? Because it gives retards wrong ideas like this >>4319997
It's not just bad it's straight up WRONG.