/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3415217
you have the same issues the other guy has:
-pure black outline
-no AA
-no highlight or core shadow,cast shadow way too dark
-you dont clearly show forms
-banding (hole in the cat house)
>basically go watch or read some basic tutorial on how pixel art is done
i would suggest the same to you but you showed some will to improve therefore pic related is how i fixed some of the issues you had in one piece of yours,case 2 is just to show how i made the cat house structure less boring(my personal opinion).A lot more can be done even at this level but i lack knowledge to improving it futher.