/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2484722
Making an appealing orgasmic face with "retarded" eyes is pretty hard. But the problem here probably is mostly the closed mouth in combination with the extended jaw which looks like it belongs to an open mouth face, thus it turned out like a man's jaw. Appeal wise you should probably lose the lineart for the single teeth. Spaces between teeth are normally connected with non healthy people and are considered unappealing. Just stylize that and you'll be alright.
Check the redline.