/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Your framing is too narrow, everything seems too zoomed in into your characters and you don't know perspective. You aren't even trying to make things make sense spatially because you lack the skills to make space work. As a result, I feel lost and disoriented while reading your shit. Damn, dude, Perspective is hard and I too struggle with it, but I don't go around claiming "bad" is a style. Just acknowledge that it's hard and eventually you will get good at it, but if you hide behind the emotional blanket of "muh style", you will cripple the possibility of progress. Back to drawing boxes until you get good.

>internet died for a whole week
Can you feel my pain?

>>6166010
Beautiful.

>>6168928
>>6169125
Why is /fag/ so filled with architects? Not that I'm complaining, mind you.

>>6171843
I'm not acquainted with the Vampire Hunter D artstyle, but it seems to me the arm is too long. The elbow reaches the thigh here.

>>6170410
Cute!

>>6170555
>>6172341
Love your stuff, Bery. And you're getting better!

>>6171462
Great lines. Will you finish it?

>>6171974
>Eloisa is animated now
Wow!

>>6172416
Beautiful.

>>6172862
I like what I see. Is this trad or digital? Can't tell.

>>6172978
What a smug cunt. Looks great!

>>6173873
Watched!

>>6173943
Nice pose and paws. I like the overall architecture here very much.