/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3503005
I had written a longs ass text going into detail but refreshed by accident lol.
To sum up, her hips make no sense, theres no indication of her pelvis anywhere so it's unclear if shes turning or on profile.
If she's supposed to be doing a bit of both it's not clear enough, I like the hair but it creates a weird tangent that makes it even more unclear just how turned her body is as it covers some of her back, are we seeing this from the side or more from behind?
The part of her spine that shows near the neck indicates the latter but her hips dont follow along and instead show a full profile near the hips/butt area where just enough of the hair covers the transition between both to make it unclear creating the tagent I mentioned.

For the face soften the edges of her cheek and the michael jackson nose, I'm not very good at painting but I tried, I'm sure you can do better.