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Anonymous Tue Oct 21 06:05:27 2014 No.1868697 [View]
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>>1865694
The other anon means you might've skimmed over the perspective on the thing.
If the shape is in perspective, it should "recede" away from the viewer; this is done using imaginary lines on the shape that eventually meet at a set "point" in the distance, or the Horizon Line.

Your shape has completely parallel lines, making it look static-- as though the shape is the same distance from the viewer throughout its length.

I also don't know if I completely know what I'm talking about so take this advice with a bucket of salt.

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