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Anonymous Thu Jun 23 07:13:00 2016 No.2573875 [View]
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>>2573736

I like it, only a few pointers:
1. The boy looks like he has no weight, the balloon strings above his hand should be straight and not curved
2. Placement of the left arm is a bit weird and also the boy's weight should pull him down resulting in a more straight arm, right now it looks like he is doing a one-armed chin pulling himself up on the balloons
3. Lower body looks a bit female

Take a look at pic related.

Well these are the things that came to my mind, if the "weightless" thing was intended to serve the artwork, I'm fine with that. Cool style, keep it up.

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