/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6844010
Okay.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zexgfixB8KqA1jjpImovbq25j-jr_Fhp/view?usp=drive_link
It's porn btw, and of course read L<-R. I'd re-export it double-page style but I think I might have reused the canvases so it would take more time than I want to commit right now.

This is the 1st version of an idea I had for a work to send in to a publisher, drawn in early 2022. It had an element to its premise that I wound up thinking was dumb, so I ended up redoing pretty much the whole thing to alter the premise to create a 2nd version. I'm nearing completion of the storyboard to a completely different idea right now, and I'm feeling pretty confident in it, so I went back to look at older stuff to compare for fun. Reading the first version of this 2022 work had me genuinely laugh out loud a couple of times (pic related), so while I didn't feel very good about it at the time I see now that I was just being negative. It's not the first time I've looked at older work and seen the positive qualities more clearly than when I was making it.
I might even come back to this and ink it for fun in the future, I dunno.