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>>4509295
You are not measuring the proportions and features properly and her face is deformed, with a gigantic nose, lips and angular chin that make her look like a neanderthal man. Too much symbol on her eyes and eyebrows. Left eye should be smaller and closer to her nose.
Deconstruct the face into basic shapes and use gridlines. Work your loomis. 5 min edit.