/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Gonna add some more stuff on the jacket and work on the head and hands a bit before coloring it.


>>3382332
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>>3382997
>>3383090
Very cute

>>3382793
I can't really add anything the other anon hasn't said already. I'm having trouble reading where the claw is going. Is he swiping down, towards the camera?

>>3383048
Something feels disproportionate about the heads compared to the rest of their bodies.

>>3383134
I like it. Very expressive.

>>3383686
Really like the style of the lineart. Which brushes are you using?

>>3384482
The pose feels pretty stiff. The armor is also riddled with too many details, making the whole thing look too busy. Try varying up your line weight to separate the big shapes from the details.

>>3384602
Imo you overdid the hatching in some areas and it looks like she's about to trip and fall, but other than that pretty cure. Also, next time, run your pictures through at B&W filter if you're taking photos of drawings.

>>3384668
The colors and designs made me think of Darling in the Franxx so I got a bit confused there.