/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4380439
I'm not skilled enough to be red lining your work, but I think I'm seeing where the main problem is. It seems like you're both trying to use two different perspectives at the same time. B for her upper body, and C for her lower body - assuming her ass is plastered to the ground and her legs are out like a frog's, which is as best I can interpret what you have. I think if you want the best of both worlds, with bent-akimbo legs and a more natural viewing angle, you would be better off with A, where her ass is not on the ground.
New to /ic/, apologies if DesignDoll is frowned upon. Obviously referencing something real is better but I couldn't find anything that illustrated the problem neatly.