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Mayde !MaydeOSpeg Mon Oct 29 12:25:34 2018 No.3658877 [View]
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>>3658325
Your posing is kind of stiff, almost like the line of action for the movement is completely straight for the whole animation. maybe the head and shoulders could follow an arc that does some kind of figure-8 shape that dips down and gets to it's height as he hits the wall, bounces back a bit, and then arcs straight down and back up during the running section
i dont know how to explain it, but maybe something like this.
the head clearly follows some kind of arc and it makes the motion look a little more authentic to reality

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