/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2900667
You're probably too hasty with your kind words, buddy. I've already tried some ways to circumvent it, to make it look the same way it looks when viewed in Photoshop. If you don't mind killing your eyesight for the sake of others, can you tell me which version looks the most realistic and/or the most visually pleasing? (I know that there's no visible difference between the first two renditions, I just wanted to find the reason it looks so different.)

>>2900699
Her face and head are too narrow, her chin and lower lip are not defined properly, the form of her head is a bit different, the eyes did not retain their original form, and relative positions of the elements are off. I suppose you didn't apply any real effort to her hair. (Because you started feeling disgusted with your drawing, and that's the reason for planting a fly on her forehead as well?) And a classic mistake of most beginners, including me. That is, drawing the model at a different angle, because you are too inexperienced to copy accurately.

>>2900710
Never start with eyebrows. However, starting from the brow/nose line seems to work for me to some degree, but I don't think that's a method one can recommend.