/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7014232
I think the main issue is that her head is too vertically aligned when it should be tilted. The fingers are too straight when they should be curving around the ankles and you have too much of her left shoulder when most of it'll be obscured by her neck, which is too large compared to her chest. Overall, good work so far! These're super common mistakes so it's understandable.

Other suggestions would be to make it clear who she's looking at, and to not be afraid to make her expression uneven to convey emotion, since the face you have right now is a bit too neutral when I think you're trying to depict her being happy. Just remember that the collarbones connect to the shoulders and that little girls have little shoulders and you should be fine!