/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2979418
here anon, i made you a few redlines. i dont wanna stand on a soapbox, not some art master or whatever, but anime art (especially high quality kyoani stuff) also uses fundie rules. its like you are only looking at the size of her face, rather than at the size of her head. i traced it around in the kyoani version, so you can see what i mean. practice some irl face proportions to see where everything is positioned, itll make anime faces a lot easier too. good luck with your art anon.