/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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Aye! So here's what I did:

I removed the weird highlight from her boob. Boobs are round and you have a highlight that makes it look kind of angular like a coin or something so I changed that. Just basic lighting for basic forms type of thing...

I chanve I changed her foot position a little. I see what you were going for with the original but I don't think it works for what you're doing. Just a spider-man thing...

You had a nice rim light going on on her chin so I was a brave boy and added that to other forms in her hair and tiddie. It just makes more sense. When you have a good thing you should stick with it!

I added a stronger highlight on her prominent cheek and I added some reds to her nose and cheek. We don't want her to look like a wax doll...

Just minor things. I envy your use of interesting posing!

I didn't really do much with the background. I think you should add some elements that go along those lines to avoid tangent with your character. Have "something" that goes along those lines and it'll probably work. You could try using some photos of roof tops with some field blur and drawing over that shit for example. I don't know. I'm just a drugged up hobo...