/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Reposting for feedback. Trying to learn to feel the flow/gesture/rhythm more. (And a little bit of trying to make shadows more coherent.) What’s the most fucked up thing here? I know I’ve just gotta git gud, but if you notice any consistent pattern of retardation, please tell me. Your feedback has been very helpful so far.
>>6812116
Yes, much better. Looks like it’s now uncomfortable and slightly lewd rather than blatant torture. I think the milk is a little too thick in this version, though. Overall, it’s a lot better than before!

More attempts to Feel The Flow(TM) like neko sensei said, and some attempts at doing more coherent shadows like anons recommended. I think some of these came out okay maybe.
>>6809473
Based
>>6809698
Nice gestures!
>still chuggin still suckin
L-lewd
>>6810312
>DAB
>figure section
Anon, I…
>>6810556
Overall good, but her arms need major work. Her left (our right) is too short and the elbows in the wrong place. Her right (our left)doesn’t connect from her shoulder to her wrist and her wrist is… wrong. That said, I lover her body, and the hair and face have appeal and the whole thing has soul.
>>6810707
Godspeed
>>6810751
Yep.
>>6810890
I love your teddy bear drawings.
>>6811005
Oh, nice.
>>6811130
I too find shitposts motivating. I’d rework the doo rag/beanie so it doesn’t look like a condom. Breddy gud otherwise.
>>6811170
WAGMI
>>6811183
This Anon tummies
>>6811368
Yeah, that’s actually way better! Especially his gauntlet and mid uniform thing. Good job anon! GMI
>>6811408
I can tell this is a female since you pointed it out, to make her read as more feminine, maybe narrow the right (our left) shoulder or make that upper arm more slender. Alternatively you could give her some boobs.
>>6811629
Fuckin’ sick brah
>>6811673
Your progress is amazing and inspirational.
>>6811680
SOVL
>>6811765
Her lips are a weird combo of western cartoon and anime and it doesn’t work. Try getting rid of the lipstick part.
>SKS
Shouldn’t she be innawoods?
>>6811801
Oh Jesus
>>6811867
Her hands could be better.
>>6811882
I can’t into anime and I’m not good enough at faces to give you specific feedback. But I feel like something is weird with the relationship between her nose and mouth.