/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3246463
>>3246922
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>>3252843
Nice lines

>>3250849
Her left eye is out of the socket. Arm and hand gripping the sword could use work, angles mostly so it's not rigid.
Otherwise not bad.

>>3250011
Could be fixed by emphasizing the tilt in the pelvis.

>>3249075
Proportions could use work, head is too big and her right leg is very small.
Bad perspective on the figure, mainly the ass and the shoulders. Boobs are dislocated, not coming from the chest. Some more minor things like the knee should be lower The hands and feet are nice. Overall if you learn to place the major masses correctly in space it won't be bad.

>>3252862
Pretty good. I like the idea and your rendering is good.
Just a tiny tip composition wise. I'm not sure if this is the whole image but if the focal point is the face/bird area then I think it's a bit to cramped in that corner. Especially since the bird is descending, doesn't look too good at the edge of the frame.
Doesn't have to be centered of course but you get the point.