/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3271854
im not sure if your going for an oversized sweater, the shape of it i dont find appealing, i toned it down and added larg folds where the elbow bents to make it look oversized i guess. highlights in the blood makes it look like slime so i removed those i always add more shadows to the blood and use highlights sparingly. light hitting from above added dropshadows, made values stronger also added sparkly things and highlights to hair. hands could use work, the bandage doesn't look like its wrapping around it. i like the face especially the eyes its nice! oh i also removed the ear it looks out of place to me. haven't criticized anything here in a while hope this helps!

>>3272607
ahh i got them in another layer underneath that i paint on top