/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1556225

For one, he's not drawing a human, he's drawing a creature from a game, and in the sense of that kind of character, the proportions are correct, if extremely emphasized for erotic effect.

Secondly, the way you describe line composition implies you have no understanding what it means, line composition includes the flow and the weight of lines to emphasize or de-emphasize shapes to draw the eye through the image and on the places where the artist wants them.

What you probably meant was more on the lineweight angle, that the lines were too uniform, I took the liberty of doing a paint over to emphasize the shapes more.