/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2927356
Placement of nose and mouth is off. Nose it too long (gives off weird bird person vibes) also resting too shallow on face - makes it look pinched. Bring the bottom of the nose up a bit so there's more room between it and lips.
The eye is also slanted up a bit too much, and a bit too high (pupil is usually in line with the bridge of nose).
Neck also looks a bit wiggly and weird in the front there. Define neck muscles more etc.