/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm a year into my own, The Concord Initiative. 18th century historical fantasy. A young, impressionable, haunted king tries to spark a nationalist movement in his declining Empire. He starts a controversial program to do so. The situation degenerates as civil unrest intensifies.

I've finished my first chapter--100 pages. 2 pages a week for a year or so. Now, I'm on a three month hiatus making supplementary material and sorting out logistics of expanding the project!

Right now, I'm also going back and touching up/tweaking past pages that are not up to snuff. I don't have time to redraw them, but I can add color. But most of all, I need to rewrite a ton of dialogue. That stuff never comes out right the first few times.

https://tapas.io/series/The-Concord-Initiative
http://concord-initiative.cfw.me/
http://concord-initiative.smackjeeves.com/
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/the-concord-initiative/list?title_no=242087