/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Besides better drawing as all my stuff could use, this "punch" could have used significantly more "anticipation", of which it really doesn't have any to speak of. One of the guys thought it looked like he was just punching to his left side and he was absolutely right. That's why criticism is important, an action needs to read well for more people than just the person drawing it.

For example, if the character were to "pull" that same fist he'll go on to punch with backwards for a second or two, telegraphing the punch, the intent would be far more apparent and the effect, hopefully achieved.