/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2181087
Something about the atmosphere seems off. I'd add more atmosphere to the sphere area of the painting, and maybe make the spiral thin-out a little sooner, but maybe still go just as far... perhaps a little less actually. Also the rhythm with your jagged grass and sharp-ended curves in combination with the sphere shapes, in combination with the cave, all of which seems to be separated from each other thing, bothers me a lot. Like, there's rhythm, but for every different rhythm in the painting, there's a separate area, and they don't seem to really come together to form something truly... cogent?

Anyways, it's sorta cool at a glance. Love the foreground subject/person. Perhaps if you made it all more horizontal it might be easier to fix all of the weird composition problems, image related