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I'm not OP but here's my thoughts.

Basically you need to understand more where to simplify and how to unify the image. I'm coming from a more classical approach than you so you may not agree with going as far as I did in this direction, but hopefully you can still take some pieces from it.

Be careful of repetitive shapes like that series of small curves I pointed out. Also I would try to get more variety in your image in general--varying size of shapes, varying line weight and value, varying edges etc.

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