/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6654810
Idk what Proko teaches but you seem to be too obsessed with the outline of the figure. You need to focus more on what the body is actually doing and that can be represented with just a stick figure. You can also mostly ignore proportions as long as they arent too whack. Use better ref as well, don't use clothed figures for gesture drawing and try to avoid poses with a lot of overlap as a beginner.

Watch this video if you haven't seen it before:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKi3-fe1GC4