/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2114003
> Mind your values. they were all over the place the highlights were almost 100 % and skin isn't that reflective unless it's some sort of extreme situation.Group them tighter.Assign proper value ranges to different materials aka skin and hair.
>Mind your shadows . That includes occlusion and cast shadows. They're almost nonexistent Establish them confidently.They bring interest to the piece.
>Mind your edges. I keep repeating , edges are one of the few aspects where you can make a work your own. Make things interesting.Add variety to it. Sharp edges everywhere is flattening everything and it just looks bad
>Mind your anatomy. Basic stuff. Neck is way too wide. Forehead is very big and hairstyle is inapropriate.It creates the illusion of her having a Megamind kind of headshape.If that's how the model actually was from the photo then change it. Don't purpously leave something that looks bad in your work.