/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>whatever floats your goat
My first attempt at anything remotely akin to 5-point perspective. Please advise.

>>6782456
Get another pen?
>>6782461
I dunno. Mostly looks pretty good to me. It’s a beautiful face. Her irises might be a little too circular for the angle her eyeballs would be, but I’m really too beg to say. It’s a little tough to tell if she’s meant to be looking at the camera, or slightly past it. Her pupils are positioned to look past the camera, but her irises are so round that it looks like we’re seeing them head on (instead of at a slight angle like if she were NOT staring squarely into the camera.)
>>6782463
VERY nice
>>6782471
Just practice. You might benefit from this >>6782632 sort of thing
>>6782537
Fuckin’ sick brah
>>6782564
Until I no longer feel like it. That’s probably not helpful, though. Sorry.
>>6782601
VILPPU. Or Huston or Gnass. I really like Vilppu though.
>>6782605
You’ll probably experience a major level increase.
>>6782610
Drawing manual or Renaissance figure drawing course. They cover much of the same material, but one’s a book and one’s a video course.
>>6782626
… nice.
>>6782677
Cute! Godspeed Anon!
>>6782705
DAB is for teaching line control, perspective, and construction. It’s like a free, more autistic, much more /beg/ friendly version of Dynamic Sketching.
Not for the weak or those prone to burnout.
>>6782725
Keys to drawing or the exercises from drawing on the right side of the brain. You gotta learn to see. Then you can do Vilppu or Draw A Box, whichever you prefer.
>>6782770
Yeah, but yours look great.
>>6782806
Sleep tight, Anon.