/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2476578
Your lines are getting better and better. Maybe I can give you just some pointers about anatomy and style.
Style wise you could make her face look a bit more appealing. Try to show the nostrils even if the head is bent forward and the tip and bridge of the nose might cover them. A perky upward nose symbolizes youth and cuteness. Unless your character has prominent features you don't want to lose, then that's the way you want to go.
Another thing you want to address here is her mouth. I'm not sure what kind of expression were you going for (I guess a happy content face), but maybe try to either stylize or push the expression a bit more. In your case you are somewhere in the middle, where you want to be subtle, but you're not managing to achieve that. Remember not to underestimate your audience. A lot of the times stylization means YOU WANT TO DO LESS TO SHOW MORE. Leave some stuff to the imagination by not drawing everything. Let the audience fill the gaps with their own representations. That's what will make the image more appealing to them. They will create their favorite features in their minds.

Next, the overall anatomy.
You have some holes in your knowledge here. Some structural shapes are wrong. Bent tendons and muscle masses that should be straight and firm, bones that connect to nothing instead of muscles and vice versa, fat tissue you put way too much detail into which results in making it unappealing instead of soft and healthy, and so on. Expecially work on your hand anatomy.
I'm not going to point out every single thing in words, so check out the redline instead.

Lineart. You should incorporate more line economy in your strokes. The same way as I explained it for the mouth, you can go way more subtle on certain areas and leave the gap filling to the audience. This way you can make rounded soft object pop out much more (cleavage section!).

Other than that I can only say to keep doing what you are doing. You are definitely on the right track.