/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg, i got more comms so now i have excuse to draw demons instead of loomis heads. Yay!

>>6892376
i have very high suspicion that fun with pencil is the worst art book i have ever read but nothing definitive yet!
>>6892294
hello mister crab.
1. PYW means post YOUR work, not post pawell's work.
2. i do shit, literally pic related. but i will admit that i have a LOT of studies and not that much originals. But i would rather try to improve than polish turds at the moment
3. it was just a banter
4. the red heads are "copies" from memory using the construction so practically they arent copies cause i never can remember everything perfectly
>>6892273
that is very nice and appealing
>>6892201
did you perhaps see anime called bleach? there is a guy who's special is summoning 9999 swords and using them to fight all at once
>>6892187
you probably have too dry paint
>>6892155
i cannot tell what is going on, you probably want to use canvas as comic page so this scene makes sense to the viewer
>>6892097
hello fellow pain with pencil enjoyer
>>6892094
asking for "level" is pointless so instead i will give you crit: both arms look awkward. the bend one looks outright anatomically wrong, the right one is very awkward, nobody runs like that. the area between her neck and booba is lacking a few skeleton bones, check some anatomy book or simply use reference next time of running woman. the shading of face is not good enough, even furry creatures dont have flat faces. for coomer art i would expect way more details / polish for nipples, pussy, booba and belly. putting whole left arm into shade is okay, but you want to have shading there as well to imply form: so you are missing 1 darker value for shades inside shades
>>6891989
i recc to pick up ballpoint pen, sharpie or something like ink, it will make it way way better and force you to level up line confidence.
>>6892424
before you start make sure you already have fundies down (keys to drawing)