/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4465666
wow, checked. based department?

my first reaction is the darks are not dark enough. the center panel it looks like she's reaching into a shadow instead of under a material.

the ~10-11 o'clock frame is a good example. Where the hand is grasping her hand, it all sort of blends together. ~8-9 o'clock the forearm and the feller's hair sort of blends to me. I understand you're not going for great realism, so maybe rendering out that too much would defeat the purpose.

could you easily try changing the underwear to purple and use the original underwear color her shadows?