/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2425547
mostly just looks flat, but do it anyway, the patterning is good practice for getting a handle on shapes. You really gotta work on form though, it looks like you're resting on stylish ideas which will only get you so far.

>>2425724
They look adequately black, the real problem is sameface. You gotta capture what really makes the individual. Read what kenyon cox says about realism from the paragraph on page 108 that begins with "One set of artists, in representing..."

https://books.google.com/books?id=_LxK0IlEQvwC&pg=PA109&lpg=PA109&dq=kenyon+cox+realism+vs+idealism&source=bl&ots=0MDZYnJ0ZN&sig=0CBrS9zVVjpRf6s6Zy8hvUAO16g&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjPx5-r0a3LAhWMRSYKHZSnBskQ6AEIMTAG#v=onepage&q&f=false

>>2426304
Beginner thread

>>2426497
look up the sight-size method and pay attention to how shadow shapes are built up. That will help your work look less... scattered.

>>2427581
Proportions are a little weird, her left boot looks flat, whimmy lines shading on the wall look like shit.