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>>1905764
These are quite nice actually.

Just two things:
Is the left one a child or an adult small person?
Small people have small legs, children's legs are almost as long as their torso plus head. Just check where Loomis has put the midpoint, the cross in the pic.

Second thing:
If you show the white above the iris, it will always look like he's surprised or shock. At least in that style.
Mark Kennedy wrote seomthing about cartoon eyes and realistic eyes here:
http://sevencamels.blogspot.de/2006/10/things-they-dont-teach-in-art-school-2.html

Keep up the good work!