/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Finished this cover today. Is this professional enough to try & publish? Does it look interesting? Is it too autistic? Cringe? Would appreciate some genuine feedback.
My comic is going to be action packed and comedic, maybe a bit like Dragon Ball. The general story outline is centered around two feuding brothers, Dorian and Dennis (top two figures in picrel, ignore the wizards.) Dorian is a successful gym owner and retired pro fighter, while Dennis has committed his entire life to destroying everything his brother has built due to petty squabbles from their childhood & familial life. Dennis opened a gym right across the street from his brother's gym, engaging in increasingly destructive attacks to try and take ownership of Dorian's gym, eventually resulting in organized militia clashes between the two gyms, their members & staff.
>>7099143
>Storyboarding and dialogue are actually the most important and difficult part of a comic. Prove me wrong.
Well of course. As a manga/comic creator you need to be a writer first and an artist second. You can have the shittiest art ever but great writing and it could be extremely successful. Example: One Punch Man. Vice versa, having shitty writing but amazing art can never be as successful.