/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6949748
Thanks. This is the character standing up for body reference. I still believe in being able to figure out how to show booba and ass at the same time. I'll keep working on it, and you're right about the face too. It might be worth a third redraw if I can't fix this one.

>>6936969
>written in Japanese
I'd have to pay a translator but atleast I know some good ones who are fluent. I'll see what I can do. Thanks anon.
Here's the newest Oi! Beach Episode update. I agree with previous anons that the art is looking a little soulless and samey. After this chapter I'll probably go back to black and white with maybe one color splash page per update. I'll also start using a brush again and try water color shading and see what I can come up with.

Latest update:https://tapas.io/episode/3012193
Webtoon scroll version: https://tapas.io/episode/3012193

I started getting more views on the medibang version but it could just be fake/bot views
https://medibang.com/mpc/titles/nv2306180607526800024117550/