/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2959712
Holy shit did you mess that one up. The original gesture of the inner leg is an "S" curve, not 2 "C" curves, there is no mistake there. The form is great and gives a sense of softness/ squishiness that makes her thighs seem thicc and juicy. In your version her legs looks like dried meat. No gesture, weak form and don't get me started on the leg to torso connection and those akward proportions.

80s/90s Toriyama illustrations are absolutely based and Dr. Slump and early Dragonball are fine works for their respective audience. While not being a fine artist, Toriyama has/ had a destinctive and pleasant style, while you have massive dunning kruger and don't know how to properly stylize. If you think Toriyama didn't study the fundamentals of figure drawing you couldn't be more wrong.

What next? Redline his car/ vehicle drawings and tell him to go back read Scott Robertson? Fucking hell, anon, you can't be this delusional.