/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2791957
I'm pretty sure if I did see the problem, I wouldn't be posting here, now would I? Just saying.
>>2791958
>gremlin
Got a little bit reminded of Incase there, haha.
>>2791978
which is subjective in it's own right but it is a work in progress. The design I'll play around with more if it's really that off.
>>2792006
Admittedly, I kek'd. Sorry though.

Now, what I'd like to ask is "what" is really off here? As in, the style/design? Or the rendering? I failed to mention before that I'm playing around with rendering arguably for the first time here, so I'd love some feedback on what's wrong here. If anything, the amount of shadows might be a bit strong in that previous pic, but idk. If the design is what you're referring to, going by >>2791958 and >>2791978, then just preference I guess, I'll try working more on it but this is how I want the structure of the face to be, tbqh.