/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6249048
>I didn't rate cat guy's stuff cause he does his own thing
I should be asking money for people to hang up my stuff.

>>5189524
shit, you right

>>4123302
>Santas face doesn't make any sense, is his beard merged with his face? is he wearing goggles that cut into his eyes?
> santa has no anatomy or structure, he is just a blob with a head
>the santa arm is really freaking me out its so small and skinny
>tank treads and wheel mechanism don't make any sense, study some tanks

You seem to have issues with the design, which is not my concern, the santa arm is indeed small and his beard is also indeed merged with the face but all of this is part of the design, if you take a look on >>4122663
you will see how it means to looks like, that's not a redesign study.

>the cropping is bad, like you ran out of room on the page, but since its digital, just move your drawing over

The image have a very clear flow on the composition to the santa until the moon, even if it's not one of my concerns with the image.


>tangents all over the place, elf hat/santa arm, elf foot with gun, wheels with bottom of the page, penis heads in santa's backpack, ammo into guns/tank treads

I agree,i should be more careful with that, tangents mess up the overlap between the forms, affecting the depth of the image.


Anyway, thanks for the critics, even if you ended going little to far with somes. "elf looks like a renaissance baby", lmao.