/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Can't believe I'm actually almost done with this but I basically just gotta finish the eyes and mouth and slap on a background.

How do you feel about these eyes? I feel like there's something off but I can't put my finger on it (besides the lack of eyebrows, I'll get to that). Also, anyone got suggestions for a smug mouth expression at this angle?

inb4
>>>/alt/
>me being slow

>>3312243
The way you've shaded it makes it look like, at a glance, that her right thigh is significantly thicker than her left. I feel like the left foot should be more in front and therefore the left leg should take up more space than the right. Her right shoulder looks like it goes way too low and her left arm looks much thicker than her left (i.e, her right arm has that whole Popeye shape going on whereas the left one looks bigger in the upper half).

>>3312238
Looks great. Blog?

>>3312058
I feel like it would look better if Bondrewd wasn't turning his head towards the viewer but was looking at Idofront instead. I also feel like his head is disproportionately small. I love the composition though.

>>3311956
Saved :)

>>3311817
Great stuff. Blog?

>>3310280
>>3311529
Favourite posts ITT. Blog?

>tfw just about done with this

How do you feel about the eyes? I feel like there's something a bit off but I can't put my finger on it.

Pls no memes about me being slow.