/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hey guys! Check out this chain I drew!
>>6904256
Maybe later…
>>6904258
I want moar of your art. You’re one of my favorite artists on /ic/ and one of my favorites generally. Do you have a blog so I can get my fix?
>>6904326
Sick. I think you should make the sword more glowy. I see the green reflected light on the surroundings, but the sword itself doesn’t appear luminous enough to produce all that light. Again, this is fuckin sick brah
>>6904571
Her face isn’t bad, and faces alone are like 50% to 80% of gitting gud
>>6904677
Without condoning or condemning, I understand
>>6904740
Neat effect, this looks like a microscope slide
>>6904779
This is excellent advice
>>6904786
This is also fucking excellent advice
>>6904848
Oh, these are a hell of a lot better than the last ones I saw from you. Good job!
>>6904871
Very impressive, especially good job on the line weight!
>>6904911
I can never get a hard aliased 1px brush to look anywhere near this decent
>>6905000
Great job, worthy of trips
>>6905001
Not too bad. What exactly is the story here? Why’s this guy tweaking some some suicidal chick’s nipple?
>>6905022
Cute
>>6905048
You tried, though, and you’re better for it. That’s more than most can say. You also drew a bit of background to give the post some context in space, which is again more than most do. Don’t be so hard on yourself, anon.
>>6905093
Aside from what others pointed out, this looks really goddamn good. Her arm should maybe be slightly thicker and closer to her body at the armpit, but that’s about it. Basically a fatter armpit that would make her arm seems closer to her side at the top.
>>6905162
Lovely. The line where her right buttcheek meets her outer thigh seems like it might be a little bit off in a way that I don’t know how to articulate. Kind of like a bad implant or something. I dunno. Maybe it’s perfectly fine to be there and it’s just a little too long or something. But I’m not sure and could be totally wrong.