/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2740553
>both eyes seemed really deep into the head, too far deep, moved them both a bit towards stage right
>added a straighter bridge to the nose, it seemed strangely concave
>evened out the top of the eyes
>made the lower lids come up, make the smile more genuine
>realigned the pupils
>added shine to the eyes
Made the mouth (especially stage left side) curl less, wider and flatter smile
>added teeth visible below the upper lip