/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1705063
I suggest focusing less on lines and more on shading! If you're going for a more realistic style, you should focus more on the values of lights and darks than the lines themselves. Don't be afraid to push the shadows more! Also, the lines on the nose bridge are a little overwhelming. You can make these less intense by shading around the nose and facial area. Also, work on the position of the eyes. Other than that, it looks good! I like the eyebrows and the mouth, they look great!

Also, here's a picture of the kind of shading i was talking about and a redline.